Category | Theme | Teacher feedback | Peer feedback |
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Example | Example | ||
Organization | • Transitional devices | “The sentences need a connector, therefore?” | “I think the sentences are very short.” |
Development | • Details | “Add adverbs to modify the verb work.” | “……. Working hard” |
Sentence structure | • Compound sentence • Complex sentence • Subject-verb agreement | “Dangling subject!” Who is the doer in this sentence? | “They ……… have cooperated.” |
Word choice and grammar | • Singular vs plural nouns • Adjective vs adverb • Pronoun | “activitiveness? Check your dictionary.” | “The tenses are not correct.” |
Mechanics | • Capitalization • Punctuation • Spelling | “however; it needs semicolon.” | “Names of the seas are capital.” |